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A re:do of my old Black Rock Shooter
Im slowly changing my style, slowly. Im trying to draw more mature facial structure.
Selling full version for Fanexpo, I have about 5 more to finish. I will get them all done tonight!
Didn't know which story I should of drawn, the OVA or anime one. I did OVA instead \@w@/
Im slowly changing my style, slowly. Im trying to draw more mature facial structure.
Selling full version for Fanexpo, I have about 5 more to finish. I will get them all done tonight!
Didn't know which story I should of drawn, the OVA or anime one. I did OVA instead \@w@/
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... I'm really sorry for saying this, but I expect better from you, Oblibious.
First of all, "mature facial structure" does not mean concaved-in chins, it's like her jaw bone's broken or something.
Second, the hand's looking weird, like she's not even trying to hold her sword. The shading's pretty lazy as well. Also, the left arm seems to thin compared to the hand.
Thirdly, I think you should study how muscles and fats works... For someone like Black Rock Shooter whose job is to fight, they shouldn't have such floppy thigh and stomach. I do martial arts, so I know that when someone is fighting, their stomach and thigh tense up and become *very* stiff, and there are hardly any lines like the one you drew on her right thigh.
You may think I'm harsh for saying this, but I'm only telling you because I know you can do better
First of all, "mature facial structure" does not mean concaved-in chins, it's like her jaw bone's broken or something.
Second, the hand's looking weird, like she's not even trying to hold her sword. The shading's pretty lazy as well. Also, the left arm seems to thin compared to the hand.
Thirdly, I think you should study how muscles and fats works... For someone like Black Rock Shooter whose job is to fight, they shouldn't have such floppy thigh and stomach. I do martial arts, so I know that when someone is fighting, their stomach and thigh tense up and become *very* stiff, and there are hardly any lines like the one you drew on her right thigh.
You may think I'm harsh for saying this, but I'm only telling you because I know you can do better